One Stanza Poem O130

A gift made for me by Janie –
These brownies are so much sweeter
Than any I’ve ever known –
Sweetened by the sweetness of Janie –
A girl so much sweeter
Than any I’ve ever known

07.16.04

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Copyright by Minh Tan on listed dated of completion.

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Notes to this poem…

To be annotated by the end of 2008 at latest.

The O-series of poems are one stanza poems composed before I got onto writing haiku and tanka, and short poetry while in action or traveling by select means like plane or ferry. These poems are 3-9 lines long with at least one rhyming couplet, and not of the short forms just mentioned. For the sake of elegance, I just called the collection One.

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