A gift made for me by Janie –
These brownies are so much sweeter
Than any I’ve ever known –
Sweetened by the sweetness of Janie –
A girl so much sweeter
Than any I’ve ever known
Copyright by Minh Tan on listed dated of completion.
Notes to this poem…
To be annotated by the end of 2008 at latest.
The O-series of poems are one stanza poems composed before I got onto writing haiku and tanka, and short poetry while in action or traveling by select means like plane or ferry. These poems are 3-9 lines long with at least one rhyming couplet, and not of the short forms just mentioned. For the sake of elegance, I just called the collection One.