Something feels not right –
When there’s a brisk breeze –
But the clouds aren’t moving
Copyright by Minh Tan on listed dated of completion.
Notes to this poem…
As referenced in ferry poem F17, it was a breezy day. However, that wind must have been at the lowest level of the atmosphere because the thick, medium grey clouds in the sky weren’t really moving. Noticing that strange counter-intuitive situation, I wrote this haiku.
The F-series poems are part of a collection composed on my ferry rides across Halifax Harbour when the buses aren’t crossing the MacDonald bridge due to the Big Lift bridge redecking. This should keep happening until at least December 2016.