That feeling you get when you’re
Between your first wind –
And your second wind
Copyright by Minh Tan on listed dated of completion.
Notes to this poem…
Very happy I ended up with a haiku I liked a lot for my 100th haiku in the haiku collection that was not composed while I was simultaneously doing some other activity, that have their own collections (riding ferry, running, skating, etc.).
I found the moment to identify it, even if I didn’t describe it. It’d be different for different people anyway. They can relate it to their own lives but be more aware of it next time.
The H-series poems comprise of haiku composed while I was not engaged in some activity during which I frequently composed poetry. That is why these are called the Inactive Haiku collection.