Keep looking at me –
So I can finish counting
The stars in your eyes
08.04.16
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Copyright by Minh Tan on listed dated of completion.
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Notes to this poem…
I’d be repeating this for a long time with some people I know! 🙂
Meant to be read gently, as you see there are no exclamation points in the haiku.
The F-series poems are part of a collection composed on my ferry rides across Halifax Harbour when the buses aren’t crossing the MacDonald bridge due to the Big Lift bridge redecking. This should keep happening until at least December 2016.
Minh Tan's Old Poetry 
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