Running Poem R062

My place is messier than
Mark and almost as
Messy as Lionel

11.20.16

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Copyright by Minh Tan on listed dated of completion.

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Notes to this poem…

Mark Messier. Lionel Messi. Multi-sport, multi-millennium, and multi-pun haiku. The “messy” pun doesn’t work well written, which is the reference of “almost as”, comparing messy to Messi. But it made for enough syllables for a haiku. 🙂

The R-series poems were composed while I was out running, in an effort to find time for writing in a life that is always getting busier.

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One thought on “Running Poem R062

  1. Wow!
    Me parece muy acertada tu opinión sobre este texto.
    Desde hace cierto tiempo no paro de pensar en esto e
    intento buscar toda la información que puedo sobre este
    tema. La aportación que has elaborado me ha parecido muy buena, no obstante creo que se podría abrir un poco más y
    de esta forma poder desenvolver algunas dudas que todavía poseo.
    De todos modos, mil gracias por tu colaboración. Estaré atento a cercanas
    publicaciones que elabores. Mil gracias.
    Saludos.

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